no critisisum huh?

2009-03-30 16:00:06 by darkclimax

i posted a story and got no comments so i was wondering...

could you please go back, read it, and tell me what you think?

^_^ please

please don't make me whip out my awesome noob attacks


Comments

You must be logged in to comment on this post.


Spartan500Spartan500

2009-03-30 16:58:15

OOO! I'm so scared! n00B attacks!

darkclimax responds:

XD it was supposed to be funny cause noobs suck and on this paticular site iI'm a noob (hates noobs)


Marks-a-lotMarks-a-lot

2009-04-20 03:26:12

Damn! I can't believe that you wrote that and you are only 14! Nice job really, I can't even begin to describe how good I thought that story is and can be. I think that there might have been some spelling errors/missuses but other than that good stuff.

I am a little slow at understanding fiction stories so I am going to read it again to get a better understanding. Nice job though and definitely stick with this.

darkclimax responds:

Thanks ^_^ I really apriciate the nice comment. since so far i've mostly gotten hate rants. I've been working on it alot and I can't decide on a few things but thanks...